Partial Drafts in Workshop: Teaching Revision 18

October 08, 2017

This is a continuation of my posts on teaching revision/revising teaching, specifically of the latest post on process. If you’d like to contribute a guest post or response, please contact me at m [dot] salesses [at gmail etc.]. - Recently I saw a question posed on Facebook about what people do to discourage students from submitting incomplete drafts to workshop. I started to write a long response, but then realized the ...

POEM OF THE WEEK: Erin Adair-Hodges

October 02, 2017

Erin Adair Hodges   Self-Portrait as Banshee   The then-boyfriend driving my car back from Vegas hits an elk outside of Gallup, twilight bruising the cliffs, and we spin around just once before the ditch opens to take us, “Superfreak” the soundtrack to the splintering,   and a twang in white socks stops to perform his human duties, saying he saw us clip the buck’s ass but ...

Recording the Writing Process: Teaching Revision 17

September 25, 2017

This is a continuation of my posts on teaching revision. There are more revision prompts (not specific to flash fiction) here and in previous posts. If you’d like to contribute a guest post or response, please contact me at m [dot] salesses [at gmail etc.]. - Why don't we talk more about process in the writing workshop? Why are we so focused on product? I suspect that one reason, beyond "it's always been done ...

Teaching Revision: All of the Revision Prompts So Far

September 07, 2017

It's the start of the semester, and I thought it would be helpful to have all of the revision prompts so far in one place. I had to put this together for my own teaching materials, so here it is. 41 revision prompts and counting! 1. Make a list of all the decisions your protagonist makes, every single one. Now change the order of the decisions your protagonist makes so that they follow a causal change. ...